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                Sanitation, good houses, and wealthy people is not something found in a slum.A slum is a rundown part of a city with high population, and it is Inhabited by poor people. The house are usually made of  mud and they are really close together. People that live in slums are people that can't afford normal lives. Even in slums there is still many homeless kids and babies."With less than a dollar you can survive"(Ongera4). Slums affect people by kids getting sick, crime increasing, and education is very poor.There is very little if not at all any sanitation at slums which can lead to many diseases.

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Introduction
A. Sanitation good houses and wealthy people is not something found in a slum.
B. A slum is a rundown part of a city with high population, and it is Inhabited by poor people.
C. Slums affect people by kids getting sick, crime increasing, and education is very poor.
D There is very little if not at all any sanitation at slums which can lead to many diseases.

Defendable point #1
A. There is many kids at slums with diseases or getting them.
B. "Human waste leeches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, especially to young children" (Fink 4). Kids can get disease because of food and water.
C.When people do their business its goes into the water they drink and food they eat and a lot of diseases come from that and kids get sick.
D.It is also unsafe in slums because crime is increasing.

Defendable point #2
A. There is crime in slums.
B. " In our cities the highest delinquency and crime rates are in slum areas..."
There is a very high rate of crime in slums.
C: In slums there really isn't law enforcement or there is corrupt law enforcement and people can get away with things.
D. In addition education is very poor.

Defendable point #3
A. Education is very unlikely for a child living in slums.
B"...slum children are less likely to be enrolled in primary school than their urban counterparts" (Eaves 11). Kids  don't get enrolled into school.
C.  In slums many kids are homeless and of course they can't go to school. That child will grow and be nobody because they will have no education and they will continue living in slums and so will their children.
D. Without education this will affect people in slums greatly.

Conclusion
A.Sanitation good houses and wealthy people is not something found in a slum.
B. Slums affect people by kids getting sick, crime increasing, and education is very poor.
C. All these things affect people in slums.
D. If nobody does something about slums they will never change.